Epic!!! But the production falls short...
Musically this piece is VERY strong!! Production-wise I felt that you could have made things have more impact. For example the low brass lines could have more weight and come through a bit more. Dynamically everything is basically sitting at one level and I feel that really detracts from the delivery of the music. What I'd advice is tweaking both the velocity settings in the tracks then the volume automation to give things more swells and impact. It's just too stagnant right now. The pipe organ is a nice touch!
You have some really nice things happening here, now it just needs a bit more polish on the production side. This is why I'm not giving this a 10 rating yet. Fix this and I think you'll have an extremely solid, PRO level piece here.